The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides a comparison of the number of visitors before and after renewing in Ashdown
Museum
.
In addition
, the pie charts illustrate the outcomes of visitors’ satisfaction degree across a
year
both before and after renewing the Ashdown
Museum
, measured with 5 options: very pleasant, pleasant, unpleasant, very unpleasant, no answer.
Overall
, the population’s satisfaction had experienced a surge after one
year
of refurbishment by almost one to two.
However
, the percentage of
people
who didn’t respond to the survey stood constant. In regards to pleasant,
people
who are very, increased by 20% a
year
after refurbishment.
People
who answered the survey as “pleasant”, made up the biggest proportion to two-fifths. Visitor quantities after a
year
the
museum
was refurbished outnumbered before it was refurbished, 74.000 and 92000 respectively.
People
who responded to the survey “unpleasant” had declined from 40% to 15%.
Moreover
, very unpleasant visitors decreased to one to two after the
museum
was refurbished.
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