In many countries people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years,

people

have started living

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longer

life

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around the globe than previously.

Due to

this

, some groups state that there are challenges and issues faced

due to

the aged group population, and the other group say there are benefits for

society

if they have more elderly

people

. We will discuss both the pros and cons of

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aged

people

along with

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supporting examples in the below essay. The major concern for the government is to take

care

of the old age

people

in

society

. In

this

current situation of the family culture,

people

started living

nuclear

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family lifestyle,

due to

which once their children grow, they leave their parents alone and there is no one to take

care

of them.

This

gives more burden and

create

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a concern for the government to take

care

of them and provide the pension amount and medical

care

for their survival,

due to

this

the government allocate more funds to take

care

of them. If the respective family members take

care

of the old

people

the problem can be reduced. There are advantages to the retired

people

in the

society

, and it is better to have more aged in our country for our development of the cities and countries.

For example

,

this

younger generation has more energy and enthusiasm to strive in life, if they have proper guidance from retired

people

they can gain more knowledge with their own stream, and not only

this

, they can get the easy references from the previous historical event that helps to build a more easy way to develop in more advance way.

Also

, their work experience will teach us to face the challenge in the future of work in advance. In conclusion, though we have more concern about taking

care

of the aged

people

those who are left by their family members

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there are more advantages to having experienced retired

people

in our

society

to develop the countries in

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more advanced way with their previous knowledge. So the the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages.