The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
This
graph shows the 3 different places in European country
between 1987 and 2007 Fix the agreement mistake
countries
comparison
with their visitors. It is clear from the graph the number of people who visit the Change preposition
in comparison
coast
was the highest one
in 2007 Correct pronoun usage
apply
where
they were around 75000,Correct word choice
when
in
contrast
they were 40000 before 20 years.
Add the comma(s)
contrast,
According to
what is shown, number
Correct article usage
the number
guests
Change preposition
of guests
for
the lakes Change preposition
in
were decreasing
rapidly from about 75 Wrong verb form
decreased
thousands
to 50 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
during the period 2002 to 2007,Change to singular
thousand
while
the coast
was increasing at the same time nearly
15 Change preposition
by nearly
thousands
. Change to singular
thousand
For
1987 to 1997 the slope of the lakes was positively constant. Meanwhile, the Change preposition
From
coast
didn't
fixed once negative and sometimes positive.
As for the Verb problem
wasn't
mountains
tourists Add a comma
mountains,
were go
up slowly until they reached approximately 40 Wrong verb form
went
thousands
.
Change to singular
thousand
To sum up
, we could say that, the number of visitors in 1997 was same
for the Correct article usage
the same
coast
and mountains which was approximately 50000,but at
the mountains was the least almost 30000.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coast, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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