You recently dida short cookery course.The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school.In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you have done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to express my positive response regarding cookery
class which I Correct article usage
the cookery
followed
. I completed my course Verb problem
attended
last
year. My name is Diwakar G. My batch number is 2024 A. My candidate number is 79.
I would like to inform you that I learned a lesson about decoration
of plates before serving the food. Add an article
the decoration
However
, Most
liked event is Correct article usage
the Most
food
festival and Correct article usage
the food
it's
competition which Correct your spelling
its
held
by you and Add a missing verb
is held
yourstaff
. It Correct your spelling
your staff
also
help
to build a good relationship with each other. It's not only helped with a good experience. But it Change the verb form
helps
also
given
a good chance to directly communicate to Wrong verb form
gives
public
.
I am honestly Add an article
the public
telling
about food styles that related to foreign foods and local tastes are done by me. I have prepared 200 Verb problem
talking
recepies
in Correct your spelling
recipes
last
six months. I have
prepared Unnecessary verb
apply
to
delicious desserts at that time Change preposition
apply
according to
my method.
If seats are available for next year, I love to attend the next cake class. Because I ready
to start a cookery business. So it will help to me. I am Add a missing verb
am ready
thankfull
to who teaches the course to me.
Thanking You,
Yours Sincerely,Correct your spelling
thankful
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea to maintain clarity and coherence.
coherence cohesion
Work on developing a clear logical structure by organizing information and ideas effectively.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual language in a formal context.
task achievement
Fully address all the bullet points provided in the prompt to achieve a complete response.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite