The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagrams indicate the highest and lowest temperatures in two cities in Australia,

along with

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it, the frequency of rain each

month

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Overall

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, the average temperature in

Brisbane

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is higher than in

Canberra

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, with the lowest temperature displayed in July in both regions.

On the other hand

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Brisbane

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rain

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rains

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more often than

Canberra

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, in which February and March accounted for the largest proportion. In

Brisbane

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, minimum temperatures are no lower than 20 degrees, compared to the data in

Canberra

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, which could drop to 0 degrees in the coldest

month

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Moreover

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, during the summary season, the average temperature in

Brisbane

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also

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higher than in

Canberra

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, at 30 degrees in

hottest

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the hottest

a hottest

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month

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in February, compared to

Canberra

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, the largest figure shown in December. The

raining

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rainy

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season in

Brisbane

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is between December and April, and the average rainfall days are up to 14 days in February and March respectively,

while

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Canberra

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is in

dry

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the dry

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season, the data are half off in

Brisbane

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On the other hand

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Canberra

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has the most

of raining

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rain

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quantity between June and August at 10 days in each

month

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

181 words

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