In some countries, it is now possible for people to buy a wide variety of foods transported from all over the world. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks?
These days, imported
foods
are quite popular among the population due to
the advanced transportation system. In a few countries, people prefer to consume overseas cuisine from all over the globe. This
trend has more advantages than disadvantages. This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
There are some benefits of buying imported various foods
around the world
. One of the major merits is that food demand will be reduced in the world
market. To clarify, some nations do not have appropriate facilities for farming process
Fix the agreement mistake
processes
such
as dry land and inadequate water facilities while
imported foods
can satisfy the food demand. For example
, in Vietnam is exported rice to around the world
and many people prefer to buy Vietnam rice due to
taste
. Another merit is that mankind have
a chance to Change the verb form
has
taste
all countries' cuisine at
their nation rather than travel to a particular nation to Change preposition
in
taste
it. This
can help to consume other nation's special foodstuff in their places.
Despite these advantages, there is a drawback to buying imported meals. The only disadvantage is that the local farmers
can be affected. This
means mankind are
addicted to Change the verb form
is
eat
and Wrong verb form
eating
consume
more foreign Wrong verb form
consuming
foods
while
they consider their local foods
have
low quality Fix the infinitive
to have
as well as
taste
, consequently
, local farmers
can suffer economically and they may stop farming work, they
have to migrate to cities Correct word choice
and they
to
better employment and earnings. Change preposition
for
For instance
, Sri Lankans like to eat foreign meals such
as Pizza and burgers rather than their famous foods
namely spring hoppers with fish curry, thus
, many Sri Lankan farmers
are forced to switch their professions.
To conclude
, buying transforted
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transported
transformed
transport
foods
has more advantages although
imported cuisines can satisfy the food demand around the world
and folks can eat foreign foods
in their nations rather than travel to other nations, the local farmers
can be affected economically as they are forced to alter their professions is a
only one disadvantage. Consuming imported Change the article
an
foods
has more benefits than only one drawback.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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