The diagram details the process of making smoked fish. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process

on

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how smoked

fish

is made.

Overall

, it is obvious that there are 13 distinct stages in

this

process,

commecing

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commencing

with catching

fish

by a net and ending with the distribution of it to

fish

shops.

To begin

, the

fish

is caught in a net by fishermen, and the

fish

is

then

transported to the port on a boat where

fish

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the fish

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is frozen in a freezer to keep it fresh. Afterwards,

fish

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the fish

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is thawed in a vat filled with fresh water in order to get it fresh prior to cutting it open for the purpose of removing the bones and

organse

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organs

organise

from the

fish

.

Next,

opened

fish

is

then

put in a vat filled with salt water and yellow coloring so as to add flavour and taste to the

fish

.

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subsequent stage, which is the most important , is to put

fish

in a smoke machine to make the

fish

absorb the flavour of

smoke

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the smoke

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. Once

this

stage is completed,

fish

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the fish

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is frozen in a

frezzer

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freezer

with a temperature of 0 for several hours.

After

this

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it is put in a cold store and

get

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distributed to

fish

shops.