The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise th einformation by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps give information about some changes to the surroundings of a
city
hospital which has developed for traffic by the years 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
the city
hospital grew as the transport infrastructure was improved, and two different features can be seen in the second diagram. The main developments were that the city
hospital had more parking spaces and a new bus station was constructed.
Looking at the layout in more detail, we can see that the employers of the hospital and people who wanted to go there by vehicle needed to park at the place that was on the corner of Ring Road
and Hospital Road
in 2007. By the year 2010, there was a staff-only parking lot at the same location as well as
public could use the car park that was on the right of Ring Road
. The other physical structure was a bus station built beside Hospital Road
and there were two extended roads from Hospital Road
to City
Road
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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