the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future production for 2025

the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future production for 2025
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The graph illustrates Southland's 3 main exports
such
as international tourism, Dairy and meat production in three different periods 2000, 2020, and future production for 2025. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that international tourism in the given country witnessed an upward trend and it will continue to increase by 2025. But
on the other hand
,
although
dairy products experienced an increase, it is predicted that they decrease in 2025.
In contrast
to other products, meat generated during the given three years showed a downward trend. From the given figure it can be seen that International tourism increased from just above 7.5
Billion
in 2000 to about 9
Billion
by the year 2020 and
also
it is predicted that
this
amount
will grow to the highest
amount
of about 10
Billion
in 2025.
However
, Dairy products
also
rose significantly to approximately 10
Billion
in 2020, but it is shown that
this
number will drop to nearly 9.5
billion
in 2025.
In contrast
, meat production got the lowest
amount
by
further
at nearly 6
Billion
in 2000 and it gradually fell to about 5.5
Billion
in 2020 it is anticipated that
this
amount
also
go down to almost 5
Billion
in 2025.
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