Some people believe the benefits of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in a particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

With the ever-increasing number of

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who partake in different varieties of

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activities, it has wide hot debate about the

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and

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of

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. Some

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mentioned that

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believe the

benefits

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of

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exceed the total

drawbacks

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of

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, especially

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job opportunities and

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economic

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.

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, others maintained that

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may pollute the environment and

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the issues of over-

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. In view of the potential advantages of

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is numerous and prolonged time, I strongly agree that

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brings advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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with, the prime

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of

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to enhance the employment rate and directly increase the economic

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in a particular country or city. It is because

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can attract more

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to different spectacular, memorable and remarkable scenic spots.

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, Hong Kong Disneyland Resort and Ocean Park are the three main tourist scenic spots for appeal to various

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to join their activities. Different shopping points can stimulate the population flow and the total

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of tourist consumption.

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,

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the statistics conducted by the University of Hong Kong, 90% of respondents claimed that

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can stimulate and revitalise the local economy by appealing to different kinds of

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and they can have the ability to buy different

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to flourish the economy

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. The more

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buy, the more local economic

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enjoy. It is no exaggeration to say that it not only lets

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have a positive shopping experience

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but

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benefits

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the diverse economic

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and gross domestic market.

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,

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is very positive to the economic

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.

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, despite the huge

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of

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and potential that are covered in the above statement,

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may

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threaten the chances of environmental pollution and showcases the issues of

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over-tourism tourism

particularly. The reasons why some busy, booming and developed countries may have the underlying root problems of over-

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are many scenic spots, theme parks and without the higher travelling

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and costs,

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producing quite a lot of environmental problems. To cite an example, London Bridge in Britain has encountered similar issues and as a

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need to be added the travelling cost with providing tax. Yet, another example, is in Hong Kong, it is universally acknowledged that

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not only cover the chances of having some over

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who join in the lower travelling cost and price by some Chinese Mainlander Traveller, but they

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can not have any higher consumption power by providing a huge

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of environmental pollution, like an increasing

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of plastic bottles, plastic rubbish that kinds of

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which can't solve in the hygiene landfills.

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, the total

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of rubbish will be increased.

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,

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indeed exists on the dark side.

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, all

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concluded that

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may have

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or

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aspects, which brings in the economic and environmental aspects.

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, the

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of

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may include overtourism and environmental problems. Certainly, the

benefits

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of

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may give you a positive

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of job opportunities and enhance economic growth.

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, it is advisable that

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should balance with the local economy and design the guidance to the

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so that they can not only bear the responsibility of buying

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but

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concern

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the

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local environment.