Some people believe the benefits of tourism outweigh the problems it creates in a particular place. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

With the ever-increasing number of

people

who partake in different varieties of

tourism

activities, it has wide hot debate about the

benefits

and

drawbacks

of

tourism

. Some

people

mentioned that

people

believe the

benefits

of

tourism

exceed the total

drawbacks

of

tourism

, especially

creates

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job opportunities and

boosts

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boosting

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economic

development

.

Likewise

, others maintained that

tourism

may pollute the environment and

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the issues of over-

tourism

. In view of the potential advantages of

tourism

is numerous and prolonged time, I strongly agree that

tourism

brings advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

To begin

with, the prime

benefits

of

tourism

is

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to enhance the employment rate and directly increase the economic

development

in a particular country or city. It is because

tourism

can attract more

tourists

to different spectacular, memorable and remarkable scenic spots.

For instance

, Hong Kong Disneyland Resort and Ocean Park are the three main tourist scenic spots for appeal to various

tourists

to join their activities. Different shopping points can stimulate the population flow and the total

amount

of tourist consumption.

For example

,

according to

the statistics conducted by the University of Hong Kong, 90% of respondents claimed that

tourists

can stimulate and revitalise the local economy by appealing to different kinds of

tourists

and they can have the ability to buy different

things

to flourish the economy

development

. The more

tourists

buy, the more local economic

people

enjoy. It is no exaggeration to say that it not only lets

tourists

have a positive shopping experience

,

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but

also

benefits

the diverse economic

development

and gross domestic market.

Therefore

,

tourism

is very positive to the economic

development

.

Then

, despite the huge

amount

of

benefits

and potential that are covered in the above statement,

tourism

may

also

threaten the chances of environmental pollution and showcases the issues of

over-tourismtourism

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over-tourism tourism

particularly. The reasons why some busy, booming and developed countries may have the underlying root problems of over-

tourism

are many scenic spots, theme parks and without the higher travelling

fee

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fees

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and costs,

as well as

producing quite a lot of environmental problems. To cite an example, London Bridge in Britain has encountered similar issues and as a

results

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need to be added the travelling cost with providing tax. Yet, another example, is in Hong Kong, it is universally acknowledged that

people

not only cover the chances of having some over

tourists

who join in the lower travelling cost and price by some Chinese Mainlander Traveller, but they

also

can not have any higher consumption power by providing a huge

amount

of environmental pollution, like an increasing

amount

of plastic bottles, plastic rubbish that kinds of

things

which can't solve in the hygiene landfills.

Also

, the total

amount

of rubbish will be increased.

Hence

,

tourism

indeed exists on the dark side.

Finally

, all

things

concluded that

tourism

may have

benefits

or

drawbacks

aspects, which brings in the economic and environmental aspects.

Nevertheless

, the

drawbacks

of

tourism

may include overtourism and environmental problems. Certainly, the

benefits

of

tourism

may give you a positive

amount

of job opportunities and enhance economic growth.

Therefore

, it is advisable that

people

should balance with the local economy and design the guidance to the

tourists

so that they can not only bear the responsibility of buying

things

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but

also

concern

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the

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local environment.