Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some parents have the assumption that allowing their offspring to their own everyday needs tends to make them just think about themselves,
while
other parents believe that it is essential to make children learn about decision-making ability in life. This
essay agrees that even a little thing choice can affect making decision process; however
, this
essay will still cover both sides.
On one hand, parenting style nowadays often involves adolescents from their need for school as well as
big things, like house renovation. Moreover
, it can make the young in the family learn to take responsibility based on their capability, which is crucial for their later lives. Thus
, it will grow a good instinct when they need to make a bigger selection in the future. In contrast
, if mistakes happen from their decision, they will learn from the early stages of life and this
lesson is important for the long run. For example
, by choosing which clothes youngsters will wear, they will become decisive in the future, like choosing which major in college, which company they need to apply to, and so on.
On the other hand
, understanding when young people select their preferences can make them individualistic. This
belief grows as parents let children take part and make everything they want happen. It can make offspring demanding and just thinking about what they want, which will make them not put in everyone's shoes by just greedy for their own needs. For instance
, when a child insists on buying new basketball shoes while
the old ones are still good can ignore the fact that maybe their classmate has only one shoe that is
broken.
In conclusion, independence for children to make decision making can make different assumptions based on what it can imply in their ability in the future. However
, choosing a good parenting style can make young people learn and grow as respectful people with great decision-making capacity.Submitted by tanvir0507 on
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