The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

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firstly

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the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad and

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Australia’s share of Japan’s tourist market. The charts consider the period between 1985 and 1995. On the top document, we notice a constant augmentation between 85 and 80 passing from roughly five to eleven million tourists. The

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of visitors

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from the year 90 to 91 and restarts increasing slowly from 10,5 million to 15

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1995. The second chart

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measures the percentage of

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Japanese tourists visiting Australia. Similar to the first diagram, the number increases between 1985 and 89, from 2 to 5

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. It meets

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one year prior

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same decline as the first document. A diminution of 0,8 percent is seen, from 89 to 90.

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drop, the share of

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Japanese

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keeps growing until 1994 from 4,2 to 6,2 percent. And got a final decrease of 0,2 percent until 1995.