The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five autralia cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart depicts survey results of people
purchase on
Wrong verb form
purchasing
coffee
and tea in five different states in Australia. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Use synonyms
Overall
, it is clearly seen that getting drinks in a cafe is the Linking Words
most
favourite to have Correct quantifier usage
apply
one
in almost every city. Correct pronoun usage
apply
In contrast
, purchasing fresh Linking Words
coffee
is the least favourite to own a drink.
First and foremost, in Sydney and Melbourne, the Use synonyms
figure
of both cities are look alike Fix the agreement mistake
figures
whareas
the Correct your spelling
whereas
percentage
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
in
buying fresh Change preposition
for
coffee
were 44% and 43%, 46% and 48% for instant Use synonyms
coffee
, 61% and 64% for Use synonyms
baverages
from a cafe. Correct your spelling
beverages
Furthermore
, in Brisbane and Linking Words
Adeleide
buying fresh Correct your spelling
Adelaide
coffee
Use synonyms
was
accounted for around 34%. Meanwhile, the figure Unnecessary verb
apply
of
having Change preposition
for
right
away caffeine drinks was 53% and getting one Correct pronoun usage
one right
in store
was 56% respectively. What is more, in Hobart, the sale of instant Add a hyphen
in-store
beverage
was the highest among the cities, it was Fix the agreement mistake
beverages
approximatey
54%. Purchasing Correct your spelling
approximately
fresh
one was only 37%. Correct article usage
a fresh
In addition
, the number of buying from Linking Words
store
was two times higher than fresh, over 63%.
To draw the conclusion, it is visible that people Fix the agreement mistake
stores
loved
to pay for a drink from a store rather than make it at home.Wrong verb form
love
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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