WRITE A REFERRAL LETTER

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I am writing to refer Alfred Billy who has been diagnosed with skin cancer. Now he is set to be discharged into your care. Mr Alfred was presented to our care with a diagnosis of skin cancer( basal cell carcinoma)(neck) and nodular basal cell carcinoma. During hospitalization,

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biopsy is taken for pathological study and has undergone removal of CCB. He was prescribed Panedein forte 500mg for pain.

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he is maintaining good health at the time of discharge. Alfred lives with his wife and as a truck driver. He had a habit of consuming liquor for the past 30 years and smoking. He has no past medical history. I would highly appreciate it if you could take of Alfred's health condition on the daily observation. Kindly monitor his medication compliance as per

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advice. If you have any doubt, don't hesitate to contact me. yours sincerely nurse

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coherence cohesion

Ensure the letter has a clear structure with an appropriate introduction and closing statement. Separate ideas effectively into paragraphs.

task achievement

Adhere to the conventions of a referral letter, ensuring that all the necessary patient information and instructions for ongoing care are provided.

The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

148 words

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WRITE A REFERRAL LETTER

The Greeting

These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or a negative development?

In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on sustainable living and reducing environmental impact. What are the challenges of adopting a sustainable lifestyle? What practical actions can individuals take to contribute to sustainability?

Nowadays, more people move away from their friends and families for work. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?