8/1 The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.

The line graph illustrates the average number of

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of day in

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and summer.

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, the data reveals there were more tourists came to

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in summer, and the time they visited was later than

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. In

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, people stopped visiting after 2:30 pm. In summer, at 9 am in the morning, the number of

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increased dramatically, from 400 to 1,300

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in 2 hours,

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it reached a peak at 11:30, it became 1,500 visits which was the highest visit in whole day.

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it steadily dropped to 800

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at 3:30 pm and became 0 person after 6 pm. In

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, the

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slowly surged from 200 to 400

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at 9 to 10 am. In the next two hours, there was a fructuation between 400 and 600 people,

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, the number decreased smoothly from 600 to 0

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at 2:30 pm.