8/1 The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003.
The line graph illustrates the average number of
tourist
who Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
came
to Wrong verb form
come
museum
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the museum
in
different Change preposition
at
time
of day in Fix the agreement mistake
times
winter
and summer.
Overall
, the data reveals there were more tourists came to museum
in summer, and the time they visited was later than Add an article
the museum
winter
. In Change preposition
in winter
winter
, people stopped visiting after 2:30 pm.
In summer, at 9 am in the morning, the number of tourist
increased dramatically, from 400 to 1,300 Change to a plural noun
tourists
visitors
in 2 hours, then
it reached a peak at 11:30, it became 1,500 visits which was the highest visit in whole day. Then
it steadily dropped to 800 visitors
at 3:30 pm and became 0 person after 6 pm.
In winter
, the visitors
slowly surged from 200 to 400 visitors
at 9 to 10 am. In the next two hours, there was a fructuation between 400 and 600 people, then
, the number decreased smoothly from 600 to 0 visitors
at 2:30 pm.Submitted by chaoweikevin on
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