The graph below shows the population figures of different types of wild birds in the one country between 1970 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart provides information about the numbers of three various
species
of wild birds
in United
Kingdom from 1970 to 2004.
Correct article usage
the United
Overall
, the shown
graph shows that coastal Verb problem
apply
species
led the index
of species
numbers. The population
of coastal species
followed by all the birds
Change the noun form
bird
species
that unsteadily increased every year. In
Change preposition
On
other
hand, woodland and farmland Correct article usage
the other
birds
kept drowning in low index
.
In 1970, the population
of coastal species
started in
the border of Change preposition
on
index
, 100. The Add an article
the index
an index
index
measures 130 it
means it experienced massive growth until it touched its highest level of Correct pronoun usage
which
population
. Therefore
, all species
of bird doesn't
really show significant growth. All Correct subject-verb agreement
don't
species
only experienced unsteady move
and peaked Replace the word
movement
Change preposition
at its
its
largest amount of Correct pronoun usage
their
population
in
around 110 in 1978.
Woodland Change preposition
at
species
experienced its largest population
on index
, measured Add an article
the index
approximately
110 in 1976. Change preposition
at approximately
Unfortunately
woodland Add a comma
Unfortunately,
species
continously
decreased until its lowest Correct your spelling
continuously
index
at around 90. Farmland species
placed as the lowest population
of birds
from the shown period, specifically in 2004 in oly
reached around 55.Correct your spelling
only
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