The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime center from 2003-2012

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime center from 2003-2012
The line graph gives information about the amount of crime in Newport city
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consists
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of three areas during a period of 9 years which
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started in 2003.   
Overall
it is clear that
the graph the quantity of crime car
theft
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thefts
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and
robbery
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remained stable
while
burglary decreased significantly The car theft stood at around 2800.
This
figure did not change until 2005. There was a slight fall in 2006. In 2012 reached a peak of 2700 before steadily
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risen
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rised
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in additional
therefore
robbery slowly reached a low 500 and 510
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2005 to 2011
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the amount of burglary
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3400 in 2003 and reached
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of roughly 3800 people in 2004
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rapidly decreased until 2008. Burglary remained stable between 2010 and 2012 before
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in the following year
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