The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime center from 2003-2012
The line graph gives information about the amount of crime in Newport city
center
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centre
consists
of three areas during a period of 9 years which Wrong verb form
consisting
is
started in 2003.
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Overall
it is clear that
the graph the quantity of crime car theft
and Fix the agreement mistake
thefts
robbery
remained stable Fix the agreement mistake
robberies
while
burglary decreased significantly
The car theft stood at around 2800. This
figure did not change until 2005. There was a slight fall in 2006. In 2012 reached a peak of 2700 before steadily Correct your spelling
risen
raised
rise
rised
in additional Correct your spelling
rising
therefore
robbery slowly reached a low 500 and 510 in
2005 to 2011
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from
On the other hand
the amount of burglary about
3400 in 2003 and reached Add a missing verb
was about
peak
of roughly 3800 people in 2004 Add an article
the peak
a peak
then
rapidly decreased until 2008. Burglary remained stable between 2010 and 2012 before rose
in the following yearWrong verb form
rising
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