The chart below illustrates the result of a British survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.

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bar chart provides information about how many people in London,

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and

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preferred four different categories of houses in a survey in the year 2005.

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, London people showed much interest towards flats

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and

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liked

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of the three houses.

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every

cities

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experienced fluctuations in terms of house selection. The

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residents

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of London preferred flats more than any other big

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and the rate was about 58%.

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showed almost 10% larger than

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.

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terraced, detached and semi-detached houses, the individuals of

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biggest

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contribution in detached homes, just over 30%. But they had less interest in the terraced category house, which was approximately 17%.

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liked terraced roughly 20% but detached and semi-detached

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over 20%.