The chart below illustrates the result of a British survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.
The
given
bar chart provides information about how many people in London, Verb problem
apply
Oxford
and Cambridge
preferred four different categories of houses in a survey in the year 2005.
Overall
, London people showed much interest towards flats whereas
Oxford
and Cambridge
liked rest
of the three houses. Correct article usage
the rest
Although
every cities
Change to a singular noun
city
had
experienced fluctuations in terms of house selection.
The Wrong verb form
has
resident
of London preferred flats more than any other big Fix the agreement mistake
residents
cities
and the rate was about 58%. Fix the agreement mistake
city
On the other hand
, Oxford
showed almost 10% larger than Cambridge
.
In addition
with
terraced, detached and semi-detached houses, the individuals of Change preposition
to
Cambridge
had biggest
contribution in detached homes, just over 30%. But they had less interest in the terraced category house, which was approximately 17%. Change the article
the biggest
Furthermore
, Oxford
liked terraced roughly 20% but detached and semi-detached building
over 20%.Fix the agreement mistake
buildings
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