Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People argue that the nation's authority should allocate more budget towards creating more railways

instead

of adding more highways. I couldn't agree more with the statement. Providing more routes for trains can solve

traffic

problems

especially

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in big cities,

while

making more roads will only

amplifies

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the

traffic

jam

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. People in

Jakarta

, which is one the cities with

worst

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the worst

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traffic

in the world,

are now prefer

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to use more trains to commute to their destinations as trains can help them arrive on time or at least within

estimated

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the estimated

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time. The main road which

connect

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connects

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southern

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the southern

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part of the city to the

center

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centre

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of

Jakarta

has been less crowded within

rush

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a rush

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hour after

Mono

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Railway Train with the same route

is

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established. If the City Council take the same action for the northern part of

Jakarta

, it may

also

lessen the

traffic

as a result

.

On the other hand

, Bandung which

located

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around 200

kilometers

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kilometres

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away from

Jakarta

is having

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worse

traffic

every year,

although

several overpasses have been built on the

traffic

source areas.

This

phenomenon may happen because adding more roadways will indirectly encourage people to have more private vehicles.

Local

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A local

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newspaper reported that

number

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of cars registered in Bandung

raised

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around 10%, a year after the

governon

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governor

government

officially

open

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opened

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two overpasses in the city

to

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public use. In conclusion, it is important to spread financial support for

transportantion

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transportation

infrastructure effectively. It can be calculated by which will eventually lessen the problems.