The chart below shows the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line charts give us information about the usage of electrical
equipments
in the families Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
along with
the weekly duration of house activities, commencing 1920 to 2019. Linking Words
Overall
, the usage of washing Linking Words
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
among the families Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
were
increased, compared to the housework activities’ amount of hours, which had its downfall in each year.
In the first chart, more than Unnecessary verb
apply
a
half of the households were 20 years late to use Correct article usage
apply
Add an article
the refrigerator
a refrigerator
refrigerator
, Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
Linking Words
subsequently
the rates climbed Add a comma
subsequently,
for
more than 40% in 1960. From 1980 up to 2019, Change preposition
to
refrigerator
can be seen in almost every Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
households
. In comparison, Change to a singular noun
household
in
1920 to 1940, the remained categories Change preposition
from
were experiencing
a similar trend. Wrong verb form
experienced
However
, in 1960, Linking Words
while
Linking Words
vacuum
cleaner had a steady growth, hitting its highest point of about 100% in the 2000s, the washing machine had its downfall. People tend to less owning Correct article usage
the vacuum
a
washing Correct article usage
apply
machine
in their houses, receding its number by about 70% to 60% in 1980, but Fix the agreement mistake
machines
fortunately
it resurganced in 2019, with figures almost 80%.
Add a comma
fortunately,
On the other hand
, in spite of its increase in those electrical Linking Words
equipments
, the duration Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
in
using those materials collapsed throughout the entire Change preposition
of
periods
. In 1920, families managed to do their home activities Fix the agreement mistake
period
around
50 hours and Change preposition
for around
then
the number receded significantly by about 30% in 1960. By the end of the period, it was very rare Linking Words
to
households to do their home activities, approximately only 10%.Change preposition
for
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