The line charts give information about the demand for steel and number of workers employed in a country from January to December.

The charts above depict the

number

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of employees and the actual demand for

steel

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from January to December

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particular

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a particular

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country. The demand for

steel

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fluctuated

along

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throughout

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the

year

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while

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the

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of workers constantly declined until the end of the

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. In detail, commencing the

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, the

steel

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required arose to 3000 million tonnes which was the highest

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during the

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. After that, it fluctuated from April to August,

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fell to the bottom before December.

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it went up to 2000 million tonnes

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the end of the

year

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. On the other side, the

number

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of workers employed in

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steel

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industry increased from January to February, before dropping to 3000 thousand people in March, and remained the same numbers until May.

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, it went up and down before steadily decreasing until December to 1000 thousand people.

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, the demand for

steel

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and the workers employed had the same pattern

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that is

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decreasing over the

year

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.