in today's wolrd many people own a smartphone. do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantage?

Nowadays, many individuals have a

smartphone

for them and

also

outweigh it.

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and will give some props and

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nouns

to

evident

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and explain

this

essay. the advantage of

outweigh

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a

smartphone

is convenient.

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means,

when

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that when

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you research

of

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buying something, you can use

you

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smartphone

to do it.

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, it can avoid

make

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making

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others

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people angry that you always borrow their phones.

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, owning a

smartphone

can

be tackled

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to

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the

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these

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problems currently. What is more, having

smartphone

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a smartphone

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outweigh

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is useful. If you study or work far from home and family, you will contact

with

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them by

install

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many apps which can help them to

gathering

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with family.

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,

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the smartphone

a smartphone

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smartphone

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smartphones

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can solve

problem

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problems

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quick

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quickly

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and faster than using

yourself

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your

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tackle.

However

, some people believe that having

smartphone

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outweigh

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will be depended on it.

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view can be explained that they could be passive

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in solving

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problem

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when they do not have a

smartphone

. What is more, they can spend more time using it

instead

of going out to do some activities with friends and neighbours.

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,

the

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relationship with their family will be limited. That means

,

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they are so busy

in

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with

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mobile

to

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work, they can not eat together and

also

share anything they

were

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are

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occured

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doing

.

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, people can

addicton

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addicted

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to smartphone

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smartphone

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smartphones

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and have some negative

thinking

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thoughts

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when they use

it

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them

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so much.

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inconclusion

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conclusion

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, there are many benefits and drawbacks of having

smartphone

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a smartphone

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outweigh

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. To control of using it correctly, you should have

balance

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a balance

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time

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of time

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and limited of owning a

smartphone

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.