The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries

The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries
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The line graph illustrates how many outfits were exported in different countries from 1999 to 2003.Units are measured in millions of dollars. Generally,
it is clear that
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this
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figure for Mayanmar rose dramatically between 1999 and 2001 despite being the lowest result
at the end
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of the period.
However
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, Japan found that decline in clothing exports.
Initially
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, it is a noticeable point that, clothing export represented a high increase in Myanmar in the spare of 3 years(1999-2001).
For example
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:
firstly
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, it can be seen that there went up markedly from 0 to $800,
secondly
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, reached about $900 in 2001. Following that, there was witnessed a significant fall to $400 in 2002 and virtually stood steady over time.
In contrast
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, Japan's clothing sales were around $600. Afterwards,
although
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there were some fluctuations, it plummeted to $500 in 2003.
In particular
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, the export of clothing was nearly $500 at the beginning of the year,
furthermore
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, it climbed to $700 in 2002.
Last
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but not least, it recorded $600.
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