The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with data opened, kilometers of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.

The table shows data about underground railway systems in six major cities with data opened, kilometers of route and passenger numbers per year in millions.
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table illustrates
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information about underground
railway
systems in six major cities with
date
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the date
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opened, kilometres of
route
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and passengers per year in millions. In general , it is clear from the table that the
railway
system in Tokyo
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highest trend in 1927 at about 1927 passengers in millions per year.
According to
what was shown in the table, the
railway
system in London opened in 1863 and the kilometres of route in it
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most
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popular than other cities at about 394 with 775 in millions per year.
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, the system of
railway's
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in Kyoto was the lowest popular about 11
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with
kilometres of
route
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and it opened in 1981.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words railway with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underground railway systems
  • kilometers of route
  • passenger numbers per year
  • millions
  • significance
  • historical context
  • correlate
  • infrastructure
  • efficiency
  • tourist traffic
  • correlation analysis
  • investment
  • municipal
  • expanding
  • usage
  • trends
  • observed
  • impact
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