The table and pie chart gives information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.

The table and pie chart gives information about the population in Australia according to different nationalities and areas.
Contained in two charts are data on Australia’s
population
which were based on dissimilar nationalities and zones. Generally speaking, most of the
population
was Australian.
Additionally
, the percentage of residents in Australia who lived in urban areas outnumbered rural areas. Beginning with the
population
in Australia, the highest figure was Australian recorded at 73%,
while
the lowest was Dutch stood at 1%, making
this
a significant difference. With respect to the others and British, their proportion accounted for 14% and 7%, respectively, closely followed by the Chinese with a lower
population
of 2%. Turning to the table, the considerable difference was in Chinese whose
population
in cities outnumbered
countryside
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the countryside
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at 99% and 1%, in that order. With regard to Australian, British and New
Zealander
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Zealanders
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, their figures for cities ranged from 80% to 90%,
while
countryside
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the countryside
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ranged from 10% to 20%. Below
this
level was the Dutch whose data of urban areas made up 83%,
whereas
the rural ones hit 17%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • demographic data
  • population distribution
  • nationality groups
  • urban planning
  • cultural diversity
  • social policy
  • demographic trends
  • rural vs. urban distribution
  • reflect on the implications
  • cultural exchange
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