Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter: • explain the reason for the noise • apologies for the noise • describe what action you will take

dear sam, I am writing
this
letter regarding the noise complaint you have made.First of
all
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I apologise for
this
unpresented
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unprecedented
experience. At
this
time of my flat,There is a construction going on in second and third floor. There are some loud machines running throughout
this
process,
also
the sound
of
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make
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makes
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a very disturbing sound. First and foremost, I would appreciate
if
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it if
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you accept my
sincerely
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apologies and I know it is very disturbing to you since you live very close to my flat. In connection with
this
loudsituation
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situation
, I already
took
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taken
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some actions including
stop
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stopping
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running loud machines after 5 pm.In
additionally
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, I advise my construction crew regarding
this
and they will keep the noise low.
Moreover
,I am letting you know that
this
construction
release
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takes
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more
2
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than 2
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to 3 days and
also
I will try to do more to reduce
noises
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noise
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. If you have
further
concerns please do not hesitate to contact me. Best regards, Nipun
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coherence cohesion
Ensure the letter has a clear logical structure with an introduction, body paragraphs each containing a unique point, and a conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Use a proper greeting and closing in a formal tone. Consider using phrases such as 'Dear Neighbour' and 'Yours sincerely' to maintain formality.
coherence cohesion
To enhance coherence, organise your ideas with a single idea per paragraph and use transitional phrases to connect them.
task achievement
Address all parts of the task. Provide a clear explanation of the noise, a heartfelt apology, and detailed actions you will take. Expand on each component for full task achievement.
task achievement
Maintain a suitable writing tone for a formal apology letter throughout the text. Avoid informal language and ensure politeness and respect.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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