Test 4 WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Within certain societies, children are frequently heard that they can accomplish anything through

a

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hard

work

. The main benefits of

this

are a productive

child

and a foster reliance;

however

, the

keys

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of

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drawbacks are

un realistic

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unrealistic

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expectations and

impact

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the impact

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of

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mental health. Instilling the belief that children can achieve their dreams with

a

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hard

work

helps children to be productive and be able to complete their tasks. Striving for a goal and seeing positive results that will encourage the

child

to do more and try to achieve more goals.

Furthermore

,

this

will promote the independence of the

child

. Once a

child

starts learning how to

work

harder that would develop the

child

's skills

such

as responsibility and management.

For example

, the famous writer Tomas

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used to write short stories and sell them

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his school friends.

However

, if one blindly follows their dreams, they can become deluded.

This

is because they can build unshakeable belief in themselves which is not rooted in reality. Another disadvantage is that could affect

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their mental health badly. Sometimes hard

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the

child

under pressure which may cause anxiety and depression.

For instance

, in

Japan

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Japan,

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suicide increased

around

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70% because school students have many challenges

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that they should achieve. In conclusion, sending the message to a

child

that they can be anything they set in their minds can be very positive things because it helps the

child

to be more productive and build an independent

child

.

However

, it should be rooted

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reality to avoid

self- delusion

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self-delusion

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and impact the

child

's mental health.