The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The graph illustrates the proportion of the population in 4 special Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 20

years

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, it can be seen that

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the share of all four countries witnessed an

incease

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decrease

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in graduall

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graduall

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gradually

gradual

over the 30

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and

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a minute growth over the following 20

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as well.

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, the population of Indonesia

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minimally

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increased from around 12% to 60% over the period of time,

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the proportion of Thailand in the first 2

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decades

experienced a gradual drop, and in the following 30

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remained the same, but in the

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2 decades will saw a small dip from 30% to 50%.

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another

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, the percentage of Malaysia rapidly

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by 50% (from 30% to 80%) over the period of time,

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that of

Philippines

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the Philippines

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fluctuated between 30% and 50%, and in the

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4 decades witnessed an

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increase

gradual by approximately 15%.