The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The graph illustrates the proportion of the population in 4 special Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 20
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decades
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remained the same, but in the last
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