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In recent times, technology has become increasingly important in education. Some people believe that relying too much on technology can negatively affect traditional teaching methods and human interaction. However, others argue that it enhances the learning experience. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays schools are more and more dependent on innovative teaching devices. Their use is strongly debated: on the one hand,
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personal relations and ruin
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well-established methods.
On the other hand
, others believe we have to modify our traditional media to incorporate the newest possibilities.
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 it is fundamental to embrace the future by learning how to take advantage of every new technology.
Firstly
, children have been educated for thousands of years, well before the Internet came into classrooms.
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, the traditional lessons have been proven to work well and to prepare pupils
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 to modify
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classical education by adding screen time since it is recognised to be harmful.
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strongly evolved during the
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As a consequence
, many new teaching methods could be implemented.
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their
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In addition
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foreign
 language. In summary, technology is more and more important in our world and its consequences are visible
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our teaching methods.
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Task Achievement
Maintain objectivity and balance your coverage of both views before providing your opinion.
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Avoid colloquialisms and use more formal language throughout the essay.
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