Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others,however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinon.

It is important to consider how children should learn to become

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good

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of society.

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some people believe that

parents

play an essential role here, others argue that school is the suitable place to learn

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value. In

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essay, I will

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discuss

both sides of the topic.

Parents

have a vital contribution in shaping their kids' identities.

This

is because children

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very good

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impersonating and like to mimic everything they see,

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the raisers can both consciously and unconsciously influence their child.

For example

, youngsters always see their

parents

' reaction when receiving unpleasant news, so that they know how to give an appropriate expression when they are

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disappointed

. Evidently, children will

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folks who nurtured them.

On the other hand

, learning how to be an

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excellent

community member in school would be necessary.

This

is because pupils spend half of their days in class.

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,

school

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will equip and

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enhance

students' character by creating a supportive environment for self-development.

For instance

, teachers often make study groups which can enhance their social skills, and

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they will learn how to be kind

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others. It can

therefore

be argued that the role of education institutions

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paramount in promoting juveniles' character as society members. In conclusion,

although

youngsters gain practical knowledge from their

parents

, they still need to be

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with comprehensive

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theoretical

.

Thus

, I am convinced that

instutions

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institutions

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much more to students' development by their curriculum.