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The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.

The charts below give information about the price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne, Australia, over a two-week period in 2013.
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The bar charts display information for the price of airline tickets from Sydney to Melbourne and the reverse flight over a
two
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two-week
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week
 period in 2013. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it is readily apparent that
flights
 in both directions displayed broadly similar patterns with higher
prices
Friday
 through
Monday
. Compared to
week
 1,
week
 2
prices
 were either greatly deflated or identical for nearly all
flights
. In
week
 1,
flights
 from Sydney to Melbourne started at 80$ on
Monday
,
were
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 all under $40 over the next 3 days before a spike to $75, $70, and $50 on
Friday
, Saturday and Sunday, respectively. During the second
week
, the
prices
 were unchanged with the notable exception of a decline on
Monday
 to $50 fares. In terms of
flights
 from Melbourne to Sydney, the trend was comparable with
flights
 on
Monday
 of
week
 1 elevated to $60, sub-$40
flights
 on Tuesday, Wednesday, and Thursday and the most expensive flight on
Friday
 at $80.
Flights
 on Saturday and Sunday were
also
 relatively costly at $60 and $50 each day. In
week
 2,
Monday
prices
 displayed a dramatic decline to $40 and there was more variance later in the
week
.
Friday
 fell to $50 and Saturday to $50. All other tickets remained the same in
week
 2.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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