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You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter •Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight •Explain how missing your flight affected you •Make it clear what you would like the airline to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my feelings about a flight missing problem at the airport yesterday. I believe that you must understand my situation. During that day, I had a very important meeting with a very famous customer who is
also
 your company’s face on TV. We were talking about your company’s advertisement master plan and I forgot my flight time.
Additionally
, when I realised the time, it was very heavy traffic so that I could not come too early at the airport. Whenever I came, they closed the plane doors.
As a result
 of
this
, I stayed two more days in New York because there
is
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 not any flight to Turkey.
Moreover
, I will have another meeting tomorrow but I have still not found the empty place. Could you please help me to find a suitable place to go back
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 The first time was not my fault, I prepared your master plan so please help me.
While
 I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my letter at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. Kind regards, Salih Zeki Köni
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a logical structure by organizing content into clear paragraphs, each containing a single idea or theme.
coherence cohesion
Include an appropriate greeting and closing to maintain a clear structure.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to adequately develop the topic and illustrate the point being made. Avoid mixing different ideas within a single paragraph.
task achievement
Fully develop ideas and extend arguments to ensure you cover all parts of the task sufficiently.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and suitable formal tone throughout the letter to address the intended audience appropriately.
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