Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this.
It is a long-standing point of controversy whether young
people
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experience
or knowledge first. Many Use synonyms
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often say that young Use synonyms
people
should take a Use synonyms
job
for a few years between Use synonyms
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, in my opinion, Use synonyms
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suggestion has positive and negative aspects, a few of which will be discussed in Linking Words
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essay.
On the one hand, the harmful effects of having a Linking Words
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is that it will make you unable to focus on your studies because working and studying at the same Use synonyms
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can cause your academic results to drop. Use synonyms
In addition
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also
cause your health to decline because when you study and Linking Words
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to rest, causing your body to gradually become tired. And when they feel like they’re earning Use synonyms
money
like that, for some Use synonyms
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they will have the thought “Oh I’ve earned Use synonyms
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, why is it so easy?” That’s why they prioritize their Use synonyms
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and neglecting studies leads to poor results and leads to quitting Use synonyms
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. Apart from the fact that Use synonyms
this
could tempt them to shift their central focus to working, to the detriment of their educational process, going to Linking Words
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as well as
not having enough Linking Words
experience
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such
as being cheated of Linking Words
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or being tricked into illegal acts
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, there are some benefits of taking a Linking Words
job
for a few years between Use synonyms
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university
. Gap years, in the first place, provide them with sufficient amounts of Use synonyms
time
to take their process of orientation into account before making the ultimate decision on which major they need to get into at college. Clearly, working is Use synonyms
also
considered a good thing because it can help you gain more Linking Words
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in life, and at the same Use synonyms
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, working can give you Use synonyms
money
and you can use that Use synonyms
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to help your parents too. When we go to Use synonyms
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, we will gain a lot of Use synonyms
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from our Use synonyms
work
, and from there we can learn valuable lessons for ourselves. If they soon figure out the mismatch between them and their current place of employment, they might think about switching jobs with the belief that walking away from opportunities that don't align with his/ her true selves and toward those that allow being authentically themselves at Use synonyms
work
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will help you create new relationships with business owners, managers, colleagues, and even the customers you serve. These relationships will bring you many unexpected health benefits Use synonyms
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, trust, and help when you need it.
In conclusion, I find that part-Use synonyms
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jobs between high Use synonyms
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, and the Use synonyms
university
are a good thing, but for good Use synonyms
people
, those who know how to arrange a reasonable Use synonyms
time
between studying and working. Those who are aware of their weaknesses will focus and study diligently for the sake of related improvement, making sure that they can become better because the path to success is the path of learning.Use synonyms
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