The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar graph depicts the
sales
of a variety of brands in mobile phones (Samsung
, Apple, Nokia
, LG
, and ZTE) all over the world from 2009 until 2013.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that there is an upward trend in sales
of Samsung
, and Apple cell phones, in contrast
, Nokia
and LG
went down noticeably in less than 5 years.
Turning to the detail
, in 2009 Fix the agreement mistake
details
Nokia
was a leader in sales
, it reached almost 450 million
sales
globally, meanwhile, other brands like Apple and ZTE just sold roughly 10 million
units in the same year. Whereas
Samsung
was right behind. In 2009 Samsung
sold almost 230 million
units, and in 2013 it became the highest brand that sold mobile phones, it overtook Nokia
's position. Nokia
and LG
, on the
contrary
their Add the comma(s)
contrary,
sales
plummeted. In 2013 Nokia
just sold 250 pieces of cell phone and LG
sold less than 100 units. When it comes to ZTE, this
brand has risen gradually but its sales
are still under 100 million
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, samsung, nokia, lg, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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