The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

The pie charts illustrate information about the proportion of nutrients found in breakfast, dinner, lunch, and

snacks

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and believed to harm us when consumed frequently.

Overall

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, the vast majority of nutrition is found in dinner and at least in

snacks

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. With regards to sodium, during breakfast and

snacks

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, it is consumed less than the others which accounted for 14per per

cent

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more than a double and triple with 29 and 43per

cent

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on lunch and dinner respectively. As far as saturated fat and added sugar are concerned it is found an equal amount of nutrients with sixteen per

cent

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Then

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snacks

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accounted for 21 and 42 per

cent

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which is double that of saturated fat.More than a quarter(26%) of saturated fat is found during lunch, time

while

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only a small minority with nine-teen per

cent

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of added sugar. Taking a closer look at the second and third charts, we can see that just over a third accounting for 37% of saturated fat and nearly a quarter 23per

cent

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of added sugar is found before a sleeping meal.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words snacks, cent with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

178 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

nutrients
balanced diet
overconsumption
health risks
cultural dietary patterns
processed foods
portion control
government regulations
nutrition education
informed choices
saturated fats
trans fats
carbohydrates
sodium intake
public health
nutrition labels
dietary guidelines
caloric content
food groups
obesity
cardiovascular diseases
diabetes

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter, say: ● why you need to use this private room ● what you need them to provide for the party ● inquire about the price of the food you are ordering

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