The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of tree types of tutrients, which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The pie charts illustrate information about the proportion of nutrients found in breakfast, dinner, lunch, and
snacks
and believed to harm us when consumed frequently.
Overall
, the vast majority of nutrition is found in dinner and at least in snacks
.
With regards to sodium, during breakfast and snacks
, it is consumed less than the others which accounted for 14per per cent
. While
more than a double and triple with 29 and 43per cent
on lunch and dinner respectively.
As far as saturated fat and added sugar are concerned it is found an equal amount of nutrients with sixteen per cent
. Then
, snacks
accounted for 21 and 42 per cent
which is double that of saturated fat.More than a quarter(26%) of saturated fat is found during lunch, time while
only a small minority with nine-teen per cent
of added sugar.
Taking a closer look at the second and third charts, we can see that just over a third accounting for 37% of saturated fat and nearly a quarter 23per cent
of added sugar is found before a sleeping meal.Submitted by suneel22.sn on
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