The bar chart below shows the average number of visitors who went to six types of attractions in Canberra, on a weekday on the weekend, in 2019

The bar chart below shows the average number of visitors who went to six types of attractions in Canberra, on a weekday on the weekend, in 2019
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The bar graph presents the average
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of tourists who visited six categories of attractions during weekends and weekdays in Canberra in 2019.
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, Café and Restaurants were the most popular places to spend
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Libraries had the smallest
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of visitors both all over the week. During weekends, the mean
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of cafe and restaurant visitors was 140 making it the most picked place. Parks came as the second highest average at 100 and continued by Shopping
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at just 10 figures lower than Parks. For the
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three categories, Movie theatres, Museums, and libraries were all having less than 90 visitors, at 80, approximately 65, and around 37, respectively. On weekdays, the average
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of people who spend their time in Cafes and Restaurants was 90 followed by Shopping
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at 60 and those two types are the
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places to visit during weekdays.
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, the
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of guests who visit Parks was 50. The three least places to visit were Movie Theatres, Libraries, and Museum at just 50, 28, and 27 in each category.
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