The diagram below shows a life cycle of a honey bee. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the
honey
bee's life cycle from Use synonyms
eggs
to maturity.
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Overall
, Linking Words
honey
bee has an average lifespan of 34 to 36 Use synonyms
days
and their life cycle consists of four main stages: Use synonyms
eggs
, nymph, young adult, and adult.
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Honey
Use synonyms
bees
start their lives as Use synonyms
eggs
. The cycle begins when one or two Use synonyms
honey
bee Use synonyms
eggs
are laid by females every three Use synonyms
days
. After approximately 9 to 10 Use synonyms
days
, the Use synonyms
eggs
hatch and become nymphs, which is the first form of Use synonyms
bees
. They can moult three times as they mature with the first one occurring 5 Use synonyms
days
after hatching, Use synonyms
then
followed by 7 Linking Words
days
after that, and the Use synonyms
last
happening for 9 Linking Words
days
.
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Next,
they develop into young adult Linking Words
bees
which have bigger sizes than the nymphs and stripes emerge from their body. After four Use synonyms
days
, they grow into mature Use synonyms
bees
which are much larger and can produce Use synonyms
eggs
. Use synonyms
Finally
, the Linking Words
females
Change the noun form
female
bees
will continue to lay the Use synonyms
eggs
and the entire journey is repeated all over again.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, eggs, days, bees with synonyms.
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