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The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from januari to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The chart shows requests for in formations at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from januari to June. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The line graph depicts how frequently inquiries were made by phone, letter or email to a UK tourist office during the first half of
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 year.
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 seen as a whole, it is apparent that in persons
requests
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 rose from the least demanding to the most frequent over the time period, surpassing telephone
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request
, which
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 increased. Email and letter
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request
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 decreased with time and became by far the least
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frequent
 at the conclusion of the study period. The fewest number of all categories-420-of information
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 were made in person in January.
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 and phone calls,
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, were at 770 and 900, respectively. In-person inquiries (1,00) had surpassed other inquiries by the middle
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of
 March;
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 rising trend sustained and reached a peak of 1,900
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 of the period. Contrarily, telephone
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 varied between 800 and1,00 up until
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 of
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April
 before rapidly increasing to 1,600, which was barely behind in-person
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.
Requests
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 for letters and emails decreased gradually until March (to 700),
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 sharply from April to Mau before levelling off at 400 in June.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words requests with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "informations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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