This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates data about the
percentage
of four various materials like paper
& Correct word choice
and cardboards
cardboards
, glass containers, aluminium cans and plastics Fix the agreement mistake
cardboard
were
recycled over the Correct pronoun usage
that were
period
between 1982 and 2010 in a particular country.
Overall
, the graph clearly reveals that recycled
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the recycled
proportion
of two materials which were paper
paper
& cardboards
and glass containers had gradually increased over the Fix the agreement mistake
cardboard
period
of years
with Little fluctuations. Likewise
, proportion
of aluminium cans had increased rapidly.Add an article
the proportion
Whereas
, plastics remains
constant.
Correct subject-verb agreement
remain
Recycled
Correct article usage
The recycled
percentage
of two different materials which were paper
& cardboards
and glass containers Fix the agreement mistake
cardboard
had
increased gradually with just above 60 to 70 Unnecessary verb
apply
percentage
and 50 to 60 Replace the word
per cent
percentage
each respectively over the Replace the word
per cent
period
of years
1982 to 2010.
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the years
Furthermore
, recycled
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the recycled
proportion
of aluminium cans had raised
rapidly with just below 10 to above 40 Verb problem
risen
percentage
over the Replace the word
per cent
period
of years
1985 to 2010. Whereas
, recycled
Add an article
the recycled
proportion
of plastics remained constant over the span of years
1989 to 2010.Submitted by insighttribez on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, paper, period, proportion, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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