The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015.
The given line graph portrays the average
number
of students
from Vietnam who are taking an education in three countries from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, the proportion of Vietnamese students
in France and America
went up over the period while
the number
of Vietnamese pupils in Russia decreased. The significantly increased number
of students
from Vietnam experienced in America
.
In 2000, there were a small number
of Vietnamese sophomores in America
since it only had under 2. However
, the trend had
rose dramatically from the following years to the end of Unnecessary verb
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period
with 5 Add an article
the period
students
. Moreover
, the proportion of students
in France in 2000 was the highest with more than 3 but it had
declined in 2005 and remained stable until 2010, Unnecessary verb
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then
considerably grew in 2015 with more than 4. It it
worth noticing that even though the Correct your spelling
is
number
of students
in Russia was higher than in America
in the first of
period, Change preposition
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but
the trend in Russia witnessed downward in the next decade and it inclined again in 2015 with just over 2 Correct word choice
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students
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