The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015

The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia and America between 2000 and 2015
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The given line graph portrays the average statistics of
students
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from Vietnam who are taking education in three countries from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
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it is clear that
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the proportion of Vietnamese
students
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in France and America went up over the period
while
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the number of Vietnamese pupils in Russia decreased. In 2000, there was a small total of Vietnamese sophomores in America since it only had under 2.
However
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, the trend rose dramatically from the following years to the end of the period with 5
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.
Moreover
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, the proportion of
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in France in 2000 was the highest with more than 3 but it declined in 2005 and remained stable until 2010,
then
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considerably grew in 2015 with more than 4. It is worth noticing that even though the sum of
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in Russia was higher than in America in the first period, the trend in Russia witnessed downward as an International study destination in the next decade but it inclined again in 2015 with just over 2
students
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • academic migration
  • international education
  • study destination
  • enrollment rates
  • upward/downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • plummet
  • surge
  • to plateau
  • cultural ties
  • educational policy
  • economic factors
  • bilateral agreements
  • scholarship programs
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