In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

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performance-enhancing drugs (PED) in sport. There are a lot of

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essay, I am going to consider the consequences of using similar medications and suggest some solutions to figure

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problem out. Nowadays,

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of many drugs is frighteningly high. There are a lot of medicines with

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components, which can influence your performance in sport.

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these remedy

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may lead to many health issues

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damage. Another really important influence of

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results is that the competitions become unfair for

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, who want to rival honesty. Every competition turns into

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race. To tackle

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problem,

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should increase education in

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area. Sports authorities should warn about the consequences, provide workshops and launch special campaigns. They

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advertisements with well-known sportsmen who won without the drugs. Another idea is to make anti-doping policies more strictly.

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, they can provide regular and surprise drug tests, impose harsh penalties and give permanent disqualifications. These restrictions could make taking these medical supplies really unpleasant for both beginners and professionals.

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of using

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PEDs

is becoming more serious. It has a lot of aftermath for the athlete’s

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and competitions in general. To solve

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problem we should use all possible opportunities to educate

people

and punish unfair sportsmen.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Performance-enhancing drugs (PEDs)
Doping
Anabolic steroids
Health ramifications
Stigmatization
Disqualification
Anti-doping agencies
Therapeutic Use Exemptions (TUEs)
Integrity of sports
Biological passport
In-competition testing
Out-of-competition testing
Whistleblower
Ban substances
Suspension
World Anti-Doping Agency (WADA)

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In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

Your opinion

In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Countries with along average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a long working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together?

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