In recent years, there has been a rise in the use of performance-enhancing drugs in sports. What are the consequences of doping for athletes? What measures should be taken to combat this issue?

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performance-enhancing drugs (PED) in sport. There are a lot of

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essay, I am going to consider the consequences of using similar medications and suggest some solutions to figure

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of many drugs is frighteningly high. There are a lot of medicines with

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components, which can influence your performance in sport.

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may lead to many health issues

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damage. Another really important influence of

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results is that the competitions become unfair for

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, who want to rival honesty. Every competition turns into

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race. To tackle

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area. Sports authorities should warn about the consequences, provide workshops and launch special campaigns. They

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advertisements with well-known sportsmen who won without the drugs. Another idea is to make anti-doping policies more strictly.

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, they can provide regular and surprise drug tests, impose harsh penalties and give permanent disqualifications. These restrictions could make taking these medical supplies really unpleasant for both beginners and professionals.

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of using

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and competitions in general. To solve

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problem we should use all possible opportunities to educate

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and punish unfair sportsmen.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Performance-enhancing drugs (PEDs)
Doping
Anabolic steroids
Health ramifications
Stigmatization
Disqualification
Anti-doping agencies
Therapeutic Use Exemptions (TUEs)
Integrity of sports
Biological passport
In-competition testing
Out-of-competition testing
Whistleblower
Ban substances
Suspension
World Anti-Doping Agency (WADA)

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