The diagram below shows the lifecyle of silkworm and the production of silk cloth

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illustrates the stages in the life of a moth,

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the second diagram shows the process of silk cloth production.

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there are five stages in the life cycle of a moth from eggs to adult

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.

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, the production cycle is in five clear phases that

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with selecting cocoons and finishing

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dying the woven cloth.

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, eggs are laid on a leaf and remain there for about ten days.

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this

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, silkworm larva emerges from the eggs and continues in that form for four to six weeks.

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stage

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is complete,

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the silkworm

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spins a protective layer of

cocoon

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around itself

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made out of a single thread of silk which happens in three to eight days. By

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stage

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, the

cocoon

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is formed and the 16 days of motionless

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begins. Eventually, the adult moth emerges from the

cocoon

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and the life cycle starts again. The second diagram shows that

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cocoon

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is boiled in the water and given a sunbath.

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, unwinding the 300-900 meters thread is

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next phase. After that, multiple threads are twisted and entwined together to

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be woven into a cloth, followed by

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the dying

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process, which is

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final step.