In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, the phenomenon of the rapidly ageing population has been a common challenge which causes the unaffordable cost of
healthcare
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healthcare
provisions in the future. In my opinion, that must be carried out but it would generate other Use synonyms
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which governments should deal with.
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people
could face a situation in which nobody can take care of them in the future in developed countries nowadays because of the lower rates of borning. Use synonyms
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, the government should encourage Linking Words
people
to store money in advance when they still have the ability to work. Use synonyms
For example
, Holland has practised high tax rates and Linking Words
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insurance
since the 1980s in order to provide Use synonyms
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healthcare
. In short, it is significantly useful for individuals to have a pleasant life after retiring.
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On the other hand
, the enforcement of Linking Words
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insurance
could lead to an enormous load for young Use synonyms
people
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people
were forced to reduce their daily consumption, earn more income, and have some Use synonyms
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a report released in 2020 from Taiwan, Linking Words
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insurance
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people
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, the government should deal with these Linking Words
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insurance
.
In conclusion, I strongly believe the government which is facing the ageing population should not only practice some strategies to encourage citizens to pay for their Use synonyms
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