The diagram shows differences in temperature zones between tropical mountains and temperate mountains Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture compares the climate situations between two
mountains
; tropical and temperate based on their altitude
levels.
Overall
, the tropical mountains
have more varied temperature categorization along with
the advantages that are taken from that condition compared to the temperate mountains
.
Both mountains
are predominantly used to cultivate several corps until around 5,000 feets
above the sea. or more than 1,500 Correct your spelling
feet
height
. In the tropical region, the first 1,000 Change preposition
in height
metres
are filled with tropical vegetations
, Fix the agreement mistake
vegetation
while
mountains
in the cool region cultivate general corps
, Correct your spelling
crops
such
as grains, potatoes, and flax. Suprisingly
, Correct your spelling
Surprisingly
on
Change preposition
at
the
height of more than Correct article usage
a
1,000
it is still possible for people in tropical Add a comma
1,000,
country
to cultivate grains Fix the agreement mistake
countries
in
that Change preposition
at
altitude
, whilst the area on the temperate mountains
are
dominated by forest, which Change the verb form
is
located
Add a missing verb
is located
on
Change preposition
at
the
Correct article usage
an
altitude
of approximately 3,500 metres
on the tropical mountains
.
Reaching the peak zone, the maximum height of the temperate mountains
only account
for around 3,400 Correct subject-verb agreement
accounts
metres
above the sea with the snow covers
the top of the mountain. Similar to that situation, Wrong verb form
covering
also
occurs in the tropical mountains
at the
Correct article usage
an
altitude
of 4,500 metres
just after the alpine meadows zone.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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