It is sometimes said that people who think only about themselves are happier because they get what they want. Others say that selfish people have no friends and are usually lonely. Why do you think some people act selfishly? Is it good to be selfish?

It is argued that someone who only care about themselves are happier

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have everything they want.

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others

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alone because no one

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to be their friend. My

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not in line with

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statement, and there are two opinions to support my statements. First of all, we often directly judge a person as

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selfish, because we use our personal

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to define what kind of person they are. Before

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a judgement, it is better to learn deeply about him or her.

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, we might

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that our mate is selfish because they never contributed his money whenever we hang around together. But, when we check the

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, we know the truth that our mate is an orphan and his money is very limited, that’s why he will manage his expenditure carefully.

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others

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others

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nature.

Secondly

, the generation in

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modern time especially the

milenials

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millennials

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love to use the word “logic”

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of “selfish”. It is fair enough to secure the resources to

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our needs

first

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before

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needs

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.

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kind of logical thinking is accepted by most of society,

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the rest of

people

believe that’s

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form of selfishness.

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, I will feed my family first before I think about

otherselves

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others

. That act of service is rational, and it is totally not selfish. In conclusion,

selfish

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people

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real and

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can be found

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everywhere, despite we can not conclude

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someone is selfish or not after

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to learn more about their

charateristics

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characteristics

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many times

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judged

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as

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selfish

person

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even in

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they just act rationally.

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on

our selves

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is more important

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attempt

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to value

others