The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. Write at least 150 words

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The pictures describe a process of

electricity

from

wave

power. A map

is using

Wrong verb form

uses

show examples

wave

Fix the agreement mistake

waves

show examples

come in and another map when the

wave

come

Change the verb form

comes

show examples

out. The picture is the process of making

electricity

using

sea

water

power which is carried out on the beach. There is no significant

different

Replace the word

difference

show examples

between pictures A and B, only picture A shows when

water

comes or enters the column and

then

electricity

is on and diagram B

Verb problem

shows

show examples

the process of

electricity

is off. When the

sea

Correct your spelling

seawater

show examples

water

push by

air

Correct article usage

the air

show examples

will makes waves come and hit the cliffs, they cause the

water

to rise and rotate the turbine. The rotation of the turbine will produce

electricity

that is

ready to be used. For picture B, the

wave

come

Change the verb form

comes

show examples

back to the

sea

and the

water

come

Change the verb form

comes

show examples

down from

tube

Correct article usage

the tube

show examples

and back to the

sea

through the turbine so it makes

electricity

Correct article usage

the electricity

show examples

is off.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, wave, sea, water with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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