The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information. Write at least 150 words

The diagrams show a structure that is used to generate electricity from wave power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

Write at least 150 words
The pictures describe a process of
electricity
from
wave
power. A map
is using
Wrong verb form
uses
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wave
Fix the agreement mistake
waves
show examples
come in and another map when the
wave
come
Change the verb form
comes
show examples
out. The picture is the process of making
electricity
using
sea
water
power which is carried out on the beach. There is no significant
different
Replace the word
difference
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between pictures A and B, only picture A shows when
water
comes or enters the column and
then
electricity
is on and diagram B
is
Verb problem
shows
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the process of
electricity
is off. When the
sea
Correct your spelling
seawater
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water
push by
air
Correct article usage
the air
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will makes waves come and hit the cliffs, they cause the
water
to rise and rotate the turbine. The rotation of the turbine will produce
electricity
that is
ready to be used. For picture B, the
wave
come
Change the verb form
comes
show examples
back to the
sea
and the
water
come
Change the verb form
comes
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down from
tube
Correct article usage
the tube
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and back to the
sea
through the turbine so it makes
electricity
Correct article usage
the electricity
show examples
is off.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, wave, sea, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 5 times.
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