The line graph gives information relating to the average number of British travelers using car, bus and train to commute on a daily basis over a period of 6 decades, starting from 1970.
The provided line graph shows the information about the
avarage
number of Correct your spelling
average
Uk
commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. In general, it is clear from the graph that the rate of Correct your spelling
UK
a
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apply
British
travelers
using Change the spelling
travellers
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the car
car
was the highest trend daily during a period of 6 decades from 1970 to 2030.
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cars
According to
what was showing
, the Wrong verb form
shown
avarage
of number commuters who were using Correct your spelling
average
bus
daily was slowly decreasing from 1970 to 2030 and they will be the lowest popular trend in 2030 in Correct article usage
the bus
British
around about 3 millions
. Change to singular
million
On the other hand
, the average of British
people who were using train
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the train
was
slightly Verb problem
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increasing
from 1970 to 2000 around about half Wrong verb form
increased
million
. What is more, there Correct article usage
a million
were
no change in the Change the verb form
was
avarage
of it during 10 years from 2000 to 2010. Correct your spelling
average
Then
, it was suddenly climbing up from 3 millions
to 5 Change to singular
million
millions
from 2010 to 2030 Change to singular
million
while
it was the lowest avarage
in 1970 about 2.5 million.
For more details, the rate number of Correct your spelling
average
British
people using car was a biggest about 5 millions
than using train or bus in 1970. It was rapidly increasing from 1980 to 2000 and from 2010 to 2030.Change to singular
million
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