The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021. Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart below displays the average closing fees of selected precious metals between 2013 and 2021.
Overall
, between all of the three categories, two of the metals, which are golds
and palladium increased in Fix the agreement mistake
gold
prices
compared to Fix the agreement mistake
price
platinum
, which displays decreases in rate throughout the recorded years. In addition
to that, the best performer of all time is palladium
that able to Capitalize word
Palladium
made
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make
its
huge progress in positively Correct pronoun usage
apply
changes
its price. Whilst, the worst is Wrong verb form
changing
platinum
that
shows Correct pronoun usage
which
negative
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a negative
in
the rate Change preposition
apply
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of changes
changes
.
In 2013, palladium was the lowest in the category by about 750 Fix the agreement mistake
change
dollars
per oz
, however
it had been fluctuating but still increasing its cost through the years by approximately 1250 Add a comma
however,
dollars
and made it to the peak
of any other categories as well for just under 2500 dollars
per oz
in 2021. The next metal is gold, which displayed a steep decreases
between 2013 to 2014. But, the figure witnessed a steady Correct the article-noun agreement
a steep decrease
steep decreases
increases
from the year of 2015 to 2020, Correct the article-noun agreement
increase
then
reached its peak
while
being plateaued between 2020 and 2021.
The only metal that made its negative changes was platinum
, which was starting
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started
with
its Change preposition
at
peak
in 2013 with
just under 1500 Change preposition
at
dollars
per oz
. Despite that, the diagram shows sudden decreases up until the year of
2020 when reached its lowest Change preposition
apply
peak
on
just under 1000 Change preposition
of
dollars
per oz
. After reached its lowest peak
in 2020, platinum
suddenly shows
its improvement Wrong verb form
showed
then
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and then
finally
reached just above 1000 dollars
per oz
at the end
of recorded
period.Add an article
the recorded
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words platinum, dollars, oz, peak with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
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