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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.
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The format depicts the current
temperature
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 and hours of daylight in
London
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 and
Sydney
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 on the same weekend in December 2018. The length of the day in
Sydney
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 (14 hours and 22 minutes) was almost twice as long as it was in
London
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 (7 hours and 53 minutes). To be more specific, the time of sunrise in
Sydney
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 was approximately 5:45 a.m.,
while
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 the sun rose at nearly 8:05 a.m. in
London
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. When it came to the sunset, it was 8:07 p.m. in
Sydney
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 and around 3:58 in
London
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. The diagram
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 demonstrates the
temperature
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 ranges in both cities. The maximum
temperature
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 in
London
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 was 11 centigrade,
whereas
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 the
temperature
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 began to fall to 4 Celcius degrees at night.
On the contrary
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, the weather in
Sydney
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 was more comfortable in the evening, with a minimum of 18 degrees.
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, it was temporarily high throughout the day, peaking at nearly 28 degrees.
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,
Sydney
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 became a hospitable city in winter with a satisfactory climate for individuals. In the meantime, the daytime in
London
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 had been reduced to a small amount, making it more painful for locals.
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